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英语一大作文复习攻略
1/英语一大作文写作纲要
2/引言、主体与结尾常见句型

引言段常见句型

(1)As is vividly revealed in the picture...

(2)The drawings vividly illustrate...

(3)It is subtly described in the picture that...

(4)…is a very popular topic which is much talked about not only by …but also by …

(5)There is no denying the fact that…

(6)As is known to all,…

(7)Today an increasing number of people are realizing the importance of …

(8)From what I have mentioned above we can see clearly that…


主体段常见句型

(1)The symbolic meaning of the picture is to show us that...

(2)The purpose of the drawyer is...

(3)The cartoon conveys the meaning that...

(4)The picture reflect the social phenomenon that...

(5)From the portral, we can conclude that the painter wants to

(6)There are some good reasons for…(分析原因)

(7)My suggestions to deal with/ solve/ tackle the problem are as follows. In the first place, … Secondly, … Finally, …

(8)Different people have different opinions on this question/ problem/ matter. Some people believe that … Others… Some argue that… Still others assert that…(论述不同看法)

(9)It is important (necessary, urgent, difficult, easy, expensive, desirable, advisable, convenient, comfortable) for sb. to do sth. (发表意见)

(10)As a popular saying goes “Everything has two sides.”(分析利弊)

(11)For example, … (举例阐述)For instance, …Let’s take …for example.

(12)It is generally believed /accepted /thought/held that …(引证观点)

(13)…causes (produces, brings about, leads to, results in …)(因果关系)


结尾段常见句型

(1)In my opinion, the best way to... is...

(2)As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take effective actions.

(3)Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings.

(4)On the one hand... On the other hand...

(5)To begin with... In addition...

(6)First of all... Furthermore...

(7)Only in this way can we...

3/历年真题议题汇总
4/学姐温馨提示

(1)审题是第一位的,不要遗漏要点,规范性上应符合要求;

(2)按照框架来组织文章结构,分别回应题目要求的内容;

(3)使用你能够驾驭的词汇、词组和句式;

(4)书写时使用45度倾斜且圆润的字体,便于辨认增加印象分

(5)积累可替换词汇和词组,适度运用复合句和特殊结构句型

英语二大作文复习攻略
1/英语二大作文写作纲要
2/引言、主体与结尾常见句型

引言段常见句型


(一)图表的总体描述:

(1)the table shows the changes in the number of……over the period from……to……

(2)the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that……

(3)as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in……/ the two curves show the fluctuation of……

(4)from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that……or it is clear/apparent from the chart that……

(5)this is a graph which illustrates……

(6)the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in……

(7)this is a column chart showing……

(二)时间断表达方式:述:

(1)over the period from…to…the…remained level

(2)in the year between……and……

(3)in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998……

(4)from then on/from this time onwards……

(三)数据变化表达方式:

(1)the number of……remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year)。  ……月(年)至……月(年)……的数量基本不变。

(2)the number sharply went up to……  数字急剧上升至……

(3)the percentage of…stayed the same between…and……至…期间…的比率维持不变。

(4)the figures peaked at……in(month/year)……的数目在……月(年)达到顶点,为……

(5)the percentage remained steady at……  比率维持在……

(6)there is not a great deal of difference between……and………与……的区别不大。

(7)the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of……该图表表明……的数目增长了三倍

(8)……decreased year by year while……increased steadily.……逐年减少,而……逐步上升


主体段常见句型


(一)因果论证:

(1)The phenomenon/ change in … mainly results/ arises from the fact that …

(2)One may regard the phenomenon as a sign of …response to

(3)There are many causes/ reasons for the dramatic growth/ decrease. Firstly, … Secondly, … Finally, …

(4)A number of factors can account for the change in …

(5) … is also responsible for the rise/ decrease in …

(二)举例论证:

(1)I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).

(2)This case effectively clarifies the fact that …

(3)A case in point is …

(4)As an example of …, we should remember …

(三)重要性的论证:

Many people consider social status and wealth as the primary goals of life, but the picture above reminds us that without health, no pleasure can be tasted by man. Good health is essential for everything. First of all, an unhealthy person can hardly surpass energetic ones in his work and thus has little chance to gain great wealth and the consequent higher social status. In addition, even though a person happens to live an affluent life, he cannot enjoy it without health. Many successful entrepreneurs are reported to be harassed by illness and some even die at the prime of life, leaving their luxurious houses, big cars, beautiful clothes and all the great things behind.

(四)危害罗列段:

Such a practice is very harmful. First, it cannot ensure the quality of the project. Overworking makes workers feel exhausted, some of whom might be absent-minded and fail to fulfill their tasks with adequate energy. Second, workers are not provided with satisfying working conditions. In the picture we find no lights or other facilities for lighting, and the workers work by the moonlight and thus are very likely to have accident. Thirdly, it goes against China’s Labor Code which prohibits employers from forcing workers to work more than eight hours per day without overtime pay.


结尾段常见句型


(一)段首:

(1)From what has been discussed above/ From the analysis made above, we may safely draw/come to the conclusion that …

(2)It is high time we placed great emphasis on …

(3)It is high time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of …

(4)There is no denying that further attention should be paid to the problem of …

(5)Hence, …, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence on the growth of young people.

(6)I assume this hard nut can be cracked if both …take effective steps.

(7)The simple graph is a wake-up call for the whole of the human race.

(8)Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these bar charts.

(9)Therefore, it is necessary for us to… in a reasonable way and restrain ourselves from overindulgence.

(二)段中(两个方面提建议):

(1)To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who… In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that …

(2)On the one hand, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control this problem. On the other hand, we should enhance/cultivate the awareness of people that this issue is vital for us.

(三)段尾(趋势发展/发扬光大):

Such a trend is definitely detrimental to long-range development of the industry and the actors’ personality. The vogue may be translated into negatively impact on the young generation which composes a large portion of groupies. In my opinion, it is the common responsibility of government and the whole society to restore ethos of the 30s and 60s into the entertainment circles.

3/历年真题议题汇总
4/学姐温馨提示

(1)长短句结合,适当变换句型;

(2)避免连续第一人称叙述语句;

(3)描写叙述尽量具体,忌空洞;

(4)过渡句、连接词使文章连贯;

(5)避免为了凑字数而重复表达意思;

(6)一种句意多种表达,形成个性化模板;

小作文复习攻略
1/小作文类别
2/书信类文章

投诉信

Dear_______,

I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍). In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果). I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming


询问信

Dear ______,

I am _________________________(自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要询问的内容)

First of all, what are _________________________________?(第一个问题) Secondly, when will________________________________?(第二个问题) Thirdly, is _________________?(第三个问题)

I would also like to inquire _________________________________(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?

Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming


请求信

Dear___________,

I am writing to formally request to___________.(请求的内容)

The reason for ______________is that______________________________(给出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(给出细节) I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.

Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming


道歉信

Dear ___________,

I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因).

The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming


感谢信

Dear______,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for __________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in __________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been___________________(没有对方帮助时的后果).

Every one agrees that it was you who___________________________(给出细节).Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming


邀请信

Dear________,

There will a ________________(内容) at/in________________(地点) on___________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间). This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排). At around______(时间),____________________________.(另一个安排)

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限)

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

3/告示类文章

告示类文章要求:

题目与日期

落款可写人名或单位

一般根据题目要求写1—3段

时态为现在或将来时


常用句型:

Your attention, please...

It has been decided that...

May I have your attention, please?

This is to note/notice/notify/announce that...

...takes the pleasure in announcing that...

...has/have the pleasure to annouce that...

owing to/due to/because of/in order to... we are informed that...

4/历年真题议题汇总

5/学姐温馨提示

(1)清楚总结各种类型文章的格式、写法和要求;

(2)每一种类型找出一篇范文,学习其结构布局和行文方式;

(3)积累可替代范文中部分内容的句子或词组;

(4)进行写作,形成自己的模板,注意一定要落在纸上,不需太多但需要持续练习和修改;

评分细则

作文的评分采用总体评分法(Global Scoring),通篇分档计分,计分标准如下:

1. 大作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。

2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有1~3分的调节分。

3. 小作文的字数要求是100词左右。大作文的字数要求是160~200词。文章长度不符合要求的,酌情扣分。

4. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

5. 如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

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